Help from parents! Childhood obesity.

[frozencherries]

Hello parents.


As a child myself, I have written an article on children's attitudes to food during the apparent obesity epidemic. I'm really stuck on the content (since I'm not a parent myself I guess...) and was wondering if there would be anyone on here that could consider reading my article and giving me some feedback. It's nothing technical or anything, I just don't have anyone else to read my work through and it would be good to hear something from my target audience. As long as you're a parent, your help would be appreciated.


I don't want to post it on here, but will privately message it to anyone who offers.

Thanks.

Sorry if this isn't appropriate... apologies if the thread needs deleting.

[frozencherries]

Basically I just want to hear what you have to say about the effect of the obesity hype on your children's attitudes... and how effective my article is.